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At my school we have bellringers at the begining of every period.For example in English
we have bellringers like:

1.jane went two visit hr grandmother in kansas.
2.stacy went with hr because she had never ben out of state bfor,

Then we have to rewrite it in our bellringer notebooks.

1.Jane went to visit her grandmother in Kansas.
2.Stacy went with her,because she had never been out of state befor.

Dogs                                                                             September18,2008

Hi,

I have 5 dogs at my house :
Harley
Sophie
Spot
Bambam
Jim
Harley-is a family dog and a playful,sweet dog who is normally an inside
dog.He is a miniature snauzer.
Sophie-is my dog I just got her a few months ago she is my bird dog .
She is a brittany spaniel and very cute.
Spot-is my brother's dog and he is tamed (very tamed) and sweet (very sweet) he is calm.
He is a bird dog also only he is a pointer.
Bambam-is also my brother's dog she tamed just not as tamed as Spot she sweet but very hiper.She is also a pointer.
Jim-is very hiper,sweet,and not so tamed(he is almost 2 years old and doesn't know his
name.)He is another pointer.
Those are all 5 dogs that live at my house,but I have 1 cat only he has lived with dogs all his life so he acts like one for example he knows sit and stay,plus he comes when you call his name pretty cool ay?So you can make that 6 dogs.